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HANaNoWriMo Day 7, total word count: 12,725.

Breezeway Blows Town, Day 7:

12725 / 25000 words. 51% done!

Today I wrote 2,626 words (up from 10,099 words yesterday) and passed the halfway point for a half-assed NaNoWriMo goal of 25,000 words, or the one-quarter point for the full NaNo 50K.  It’s starting to look more and more like the full 50,000 words is doable, but you never know.  The big thing that I thought was going to cause all kind of havoc in November turned out to be nothing, which means that it’s just an ordinary month with a major holiday at the end of it.

I’m still in the very early stages of the story; in the last day or two it started to bog down a little, so I finished the early scenes with the Chief Protagonist and moved on scenes introducing to other point-of-view characters for a nice change of pace.

I haven’t gone for a run or gone to the gym since NaNo started, and I feel like a complete slug.  I still don’t know what I’m going to do tomorrow morning — I missed last Sunday’s long run, I don’t know about missing two in a row.  Maybe I’ll take a shorter long run as a compromise.  We’ll see.

Here’s an excerpt from today’s output:

As he fired up a five-dollar Rocky Patel, he heard the crackle of a patch of ice breaking behind him.  “Hello, Felicia,” he said without turning around.  “You’re getting clumsy in your old age.”

Try not to get too excited.

If you’re doing NaNoWriMo, you might want to give a listen to I Should Be Writing #135, which is all about NaNo, including interviews with pro authors and serious WriMos Nathan Lowell and David Niall Wilson, and NaNoWriMo founder Chris Baty.  Host Mur Lafferty is doing NaNo as well.

I just looked back through the archives and it took me exactly a month to get through the first 25,000 words of Meet the Larssons last year, as noted in this post.  I’ve got to believe I can do better now than I did in the first month I started writing again, right?

Now, if you’ll excuse me, Chadicus looks like he’s trying to catch up to my word count. Can’t have that…

HANaNoWriMo Total Word Count: 8714.

No time for an update, it’s ridiculously late. I’m backdating the time stamp on this post by 10 minutes so it hits for the correct day. Been working on work work all evening, so no NaNo progress since the train home. Big day in other news, but that will have to wait until tomorrow or the weekend.

HANaNoWriMo Word Count Total as of Day 4: 7547.

Breezeway Blows Town, Day 4:

 

7547 / 25000 words. 30% done!

My half-assed NaNoWriMo project continues apace.  While it looks like I’m on track to do a full NaNoWriMo novel at 50,000 words by November 30, I’m painfully aware that it’s only November 4, and a lot can happen to throw a wannabe novelist of his or her game.  I’m sticking to my 25,000 goal until I get a hell of a lot closer to 25K.

I finished rereading Stephen King’s On Writing this morning.  This is my third time reading it, and I think I got more out of it now that I’ve been writing my own fiction for close to two years.  If you’re writing and you haven’t read it, I strongly recommend it, even if you’re not necessarily a fan of King’s work.

HANaNoWriMo Word Count Total as of Day 3: 5766.

I’m falling asleep at the computer pathetically early, but so it is.  It’s 10:37pm, and, after writing both ways on the train, at the ChiWriMo South Loop Write-In over lunch, and again at home, I’m falling asleep on the keyboard of my MacBook.

Here’s today’s chart for my NaNoWriMo progress:

Breezeway Blows Town, Day 3:

5766 / 25000 words. 23% done!

One resource for fellow Wrimos that I’m enjoying is the encore presentation of The Nanomonkeys over at The Secret Lair. This is an encore feed of a short daily podcast that ran during the 2006 and 2007 NaNoWriMos, but is essentially as useful today as it was then. Highly recommended.

HANaNoWriMo Word Count for Day 2: 4036

Breezeway Blows Town, Day 2:

4036 / 25000 words. 16% done!

HANaNoWriMo Word Count for Day 1: 2697.

Breezeway Blows Town, progress so far:


2697 / 25000 words. 11% done!

Of course, this is just 11% of the way to my half-assed goal of 25,000 words, not 11% of a finished first draft.  But the prologue is done, and I’ve started on Chapter 1. I feel like I’m getting some momentum, which is a good way to start and a sure sign that I won’t have time to write anything else this week.

Weekend Update: Halloween Yesterday, NaNoWriMo Today.

We had an awesome Halloween. As usual, the Siren risked her health and sanity working her tucus off to make the kids’ costumes:

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Robin Hood

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Joan of Arc

I threw something together at the last minute to amuse the Unfocused Children:

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The mysterious Zorro!

Trick or treating went well. Unfocused Girl monitors the candy Junior gets, tells him when something has peanuts in it, and politely asks the candy-dispensing adult if they have anything without nuts. There were a few houses where the answer was no, they’d just bought a Costco-sized bag of Reese’s and that was all they had, and I had to ask her not to lecture them. She’s a good big sister, and didn’t take any candy from those houses even for her own pumpkin-shaped bucket so we wouldn’t have them in the house.

After trick or treating, we had a few neighbors and friends and their kids over. The kids watched The Never-Ending Story, and the adults enjoyed tasty adult beverages. It was all fun and games until the guests left and it was time for bed: Junior could barely stop crying because Halloween was over.

I had to wash my hair twice to get most of the black spray-coloring out of it, and it’s still a little darker than usual.

Frakking WordPress just ate the second half of this post when I tried to save. Trying again.

Today is the start of National Novel Writing Month, NaNoWriMo. I’m giving it a half-assed effort this year — I’ve set a loosey-goosey word count goal of 25,000 (half the official NaNoWriMo goal), but my real goal is to kick-start a new novel, Breezeway Blows Town. If I don’t make 25,000 words but make a good start on Breezeway, build some momentum, and get back in the habit of writing almost every day, I’ll be happy.

I’ll post my word count here, since that’s the only measure I’ve got. Fellow Wrimos can buddy me; I’m user 261488 on the NaNoWriMo website.

Go ChiWriMos!

HANaNoWriMo.

I said I wouldn’t do NaNoWriMo this year. I wanted to do it last year, but was burned out from finishing the first draft of Meet the Larssons in October.  This year, I’m too busy at work, and the Siren has been called for grand jury duty in November which will turn everything upside down here at home. But I need a kick start for my writing, and I have what I think is the perfect idea for a NaNoWriMo novel.

So I’m making a half-assed commitment to make a half-assed effort at NaNoWriMo, with a goal of writing 25,000 words (instead of 50,000) of a new novel in the month of November. That would require less than a thousand words a day, but will be a respectable start to the new project.

If you’re doing NaNoWriMo this year and care join me in my half-assed attempt, add me as a writing buddy on the NaNo website. My user name is the same as it is here, Unfocused Me, and my author ID number is 261488. You can also just click here to add me.

Scrappy Doo.

Yesterday, I was 3800 words in to the short story I started Labor Day weekend, around halfway through and had notes for the rest of it, when I realized I was doing it wrong.  The plot was fine, the main character was all right, but the scenes were all wrong, and I had her interacting with the wrong people.  Looking at it, I could tell that I couldn’t fix it by revising; I had to scrap the whole thing. I doubt there are two words together in the first draft that I can really use.

So I junked it. I moved the original draft into the “Research” folder in the Scrivener project for the story and started a new draft from scratch. I got more than 1,000 words written today, and probably would have made more progress if I hadn’t started to come down with a godawful headache; luckily, it receded somewhat and I was functional for at least part of the evening.  I’m going to try to finish the whole story in a week, the right way this time. We’ll see.

Summer’s End.

Labor Day always feels so bittersweet, because it means the end of summer  but also the start of a new year. The official calendar, not to mention The Firm’s fiscal calendar, may start on January 1, but everybody knows the real start of the year is the first Monday in September.

Junior started kindergarten a week and a half ago. It’s hard to believe how much he stretched out so much over the summer; rides he was too short to go on in June were no problem when we went back to the boardwalk at the beach in August.  He’s hugely excited to be one of the big kids in his three-year mixed classroom, and he seems to be taking learning much more seriously than he has in the past.

Unfocused Girl starts third grade in the morning and is raring to go. There are only 11 kids in her homeroom this year, and only four of them (including UG) are girls, but she’s already friends with one of them so I expect it will be all right. I hope.

I spent a lot of my summer thinking about, worrying about, and finally working on The Chapter. I didn’t make any progress on my current novel-at-a-standstill, Project Hometown, or any other fiction project. I did, however, have several good ideas for other novels or short stories, which I managed to capture either in Evernote (my new outboard brain) or my Moleskine notebook.  When I found myself at loose ends this weekend, between the completion of The Chapter and canceling most of our plans for the weekend because Unfocused Girl had a fever, I was able to pick up one of the short story ideas and start right in on it. Writing fiction again felt a little like pulling on your favorite sweater on the first cool day of fall and finding that it doesn’t fit quite the same way it did the previous winter; it takes a couple of hours to get used to it and for it to stretch a little, but pretty soon it’s just as comfortable as it ever was.  I’m 1,537 words into “It Takes a Village,” the story I started Saturday afternoon, and I’m looking forward to getting back to Project Hometown once I finish the first draft.

I knocked out a pleasant 10 mile run yesterday in 1:31:49, too. The Chicago Half Marathon is next Sunday, and while I’m hoping for a finish around 1:45, I’m not expecting much. I plan to run just to enjoy it, and treat it like a training run for the races I’m running in October.

I’m feeling optimistic, just like at the start of a new school year. I wish I had a new Trapper Keeper as cool as Unfocused Girl’s, though:

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