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	<title>Comments on: Revising Meet the Larssons, Day 1:  The Horror, The Horror.</title>
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		<title>By: Unfocused Me</title>
		<link>http://theunfocusedlife.com/2008/12/04/revising-meet-the-larssons-day-1-the-horror-the-horror/#comment-3079</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Unfocused Me]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Dec 2008 19:17:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Amy  - I didn&#039;t say I got it &lt;em&gt;right&lt;/em&gt;.

Mike - sorry &#039;bout that.  Believe me, mine are worse.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Amy  &#8211; I didn&#8217;t say I got it <em>right</em>.</p>
<p>Mike &#8211; sorry &#8217;bout that.  Believe me, mine are worse.</p>
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		<title>By: Mike</title>
		<link>http://theunfocusedlife.com/2008/12/04/revising-meet-the-larssons-day-1-the-horror-the-horror/#comment-3077</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mike]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Dec 2008 15:06:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You&#039;ve brought back bad high school memories bringing up theme. 

Good luck on the revisions, I don&#039;t see how anyone could do that in two or three weeks. I think your estimate is more realistic.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;ve brought back bad high school memories bringing up theme. </p>
<p>Good luck on the revisions, I don&#8217;t see how anyone could do that in two or three weeks. I think your estimate is more realistic.</p>
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		<title>By: Amy Bai</title>
		<link>http://theunfocusedlife.com/2008/12/04/revising-meet-the-larssons-day-1-the-horror-the-horror/#comment-3076</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Amy Bai]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Dec 2008 14:42:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Bless you, theme-finding is harder than panning for gold, and far messier. Good for you for only taking half an hour - you don&#039;t even want to know how long it took me. :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bless you, theme-finding is harder than panning for gold, and far messier. Good for you for only taking half an hour &#8211; you don&#8217;t even want to know how long it took me. :)</p>
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		<title>By: Unfocused Me</title>
		<link>http://theunfocusedlife.com/2008/12/04/revising-meet-the-larssons-day-1-the-horror-the-horror/#comment-3075</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Unfocused Me]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Dec 2008 13:16:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ralph - I am not (as you can tell from reading this blog) the most introspective guy on the block; that would be Introspective Artie, who lives down the street.  Writing the novel has been a bit of an exercise in plumbing the previously unplumbed murky depths.  Finding the theme to the stuff I dredged up was actually less painful than I expected it to be.  But my brain still hurts.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ralph &#8211; I am not (as you can tell from reading this blog) the most introspective guy on the block; that would be Introspective Artie, who lives down the street.  Writing the novel has been a bit of an exercise in plumbing the previously unplumbed murky depths.  Finding the theme to the stuff I dredged up was actually less painful than I expected it to be.  But my brain still hurts.</p>
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		<title>By: ralfast</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[ralfast]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Dec 2008 10:31:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Theme, what&#039;s that?

Kidding. But I understand your frustration. I was tackling the conflicts/subplots yesterday. Seemed a bit of an academic exercise when the bulk of them were variations on the same.

Oh well!

Good luck....]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Theme, what&#8217;s that?</p>
<p>Kidding. But I understand your frustration. I was tackling the conflicts/subplots yesterday. Seemed a bit of an academic exercise when the bulk of them were variations on the same.</p>
<p>Oh well!</p>
<p>Good luck&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>By: Unfocused Me</title>
		<link>http://theunfocusedlife.com/2008/12/04/revising-meet-the-larssons-day-1-the-horror-the-horror/#comment-3069</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Unfocused Me]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Dec 2008 05:59:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks for stopping by and the good wishes, B.E.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for stopping by and the good wishes, B.E.</p>
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		<title>By: bloggingexperiments</title>
		<link>http://theunfocusedlife.com/2008/12/04/revising-meet-the-larssons-day-1-the-horror-the-horror/#comment-3068</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[bloggingexperiments]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Dec 2008 05:42:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ha!  I feel for you.  I just finished the major revisions on my novel, THE GATEKEEPERS&#039; CHARGE.  I did not use Holly&#039;s one-pass revision plan, because frankly, I started revising before I ever heard anything about that...maybe next time.

I wish you lots of luck and look forward to following your progress. :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ha!  I feel for you.  I just finished the major revisions on my novel, THE GATEKEEPERS&#8217; CHARGE.  I did not use Holly&#8217;s one-pass revision plan, because frankly, I started revising before I ever heard anything about that&#8230;maybe next time.</p>
<p>I wish you lots of luck and look forward to following your progress. :)</p>
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